Flash Fiction Challenge – Magic

Flash Fiction Challenge: August 23, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes magic. It can be a supernatural force, a moment or idea, or use it as a verb. Go where the prompt leads.

https://carrotranch.com/2018/08/24/august-23-flash-fiction-challenge/

“Breakfast”

Nobody even mentions the comet.

But she saw it! Last night. Out the window.

Would they even believe her?

Nobody believes her. Ever.

 

The little boy squints at her over his oatmeal.

Come on…what’s your name?

She shakes her head. Chews.

The little girl smiles at her.

 

If only she could stay here forever.

She wishes hard for a magic wand.

Poof! She would belong in this blue house with the swings.

This nice man. This nice lady. This little girl and little boy. And her. Safe.

 

She would stop remembering.

And she’d never have to go back.

7 thoughts on “Flash Fiction Challenge – Magic

  1. I like the mystical feel to your story. It reminds me of the stories of children choosing their parents prior to birth. I think this child has made a good choice.

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